Come with me, hold the soft of my palm and I’ll take you to the end of the horizon. It is the place where the light dissolves into the mouth of the night, bewitching it to be solidarity, where it demands destruction vied with modesty. It is a place located at the downtown of lush green grounds that form elliptical passages from faith to fallacy, and so hollow that the wind of anticipation never passes untouched of the grandeur.
I will show you the corners of my mind that I locked by chains of obligations and necessities, do not be scared if you find blood and darkness there. Do not think you are into a gluttony house, I did not massacre it with knives and stones. Do not touch the walls of those corners, onto those walls are shunned out emotions. Let them be, just watch them sleep. You’ll see they are patched with a peculiar serenity.
Do not turn your face away from me, see the light in my eyes if you can. Look at the subcontinents and oceans that have been locked under the eyelids. Demand of me, all rights to surf onto the waves of my intellectual belongings. I’ll take you to glaciers that do not melt away like the heart I put behind bars.
Come with me to all the places I’ve got to show, imbibe the raw nectar of it from the surface of my unruly mind and put fire to me. Take a step back, maybe two. Watch me burn. Watch be burn down to ashes of nothingness. Touch the ashes, put them on the soft of your palm. Close your eyes now, take a spin.
You’re with me on my journey to nowhere. Do not look back from here, the ‘nothing’ is as certain as the fire that could burn me not. Keep Moving. Close the soft of your palm and give in to the journey to nowhere.
Do you feel me now?
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Beautiful. β€
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Thank you dearly! π
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.Enigmatic, alluring, and very beautiful but also, sad…
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True. Thank you so much Pam. π
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My pleasure.:0)
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I wanted to ask you something. May I?
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Of course, sweetheart.
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You have been reading me for quite some time now. I want you to be very honest to me.
Is it that my posts have lost the aura that they had? Like do you find it difficult connecting to them now?
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No. You have a very active mind and notice many details. As artists, we see things most people never see and we can overwhelm with detail. I’ve had this problem more in my painting than writing but still, I have to edit myself and set my adjectives to address the main point and not address the anterior thoughts around it. Does that make sense? Also, you can’t connect with everyone or even with some all of the time. None of us can grasp anything we aren’t ready to understand.
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Thank you. I think I encounter similar problems as you do/did.
I’m glad you took a moment to address my snafu. I owe you. Love and hugs to you. π
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Now, don’t go and over-edit. You are very talented and do much more right than wrong. It’s a learning process.
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Thank you. This just gave me a push. I love you. π
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Love you right back! Have a wonderful weekend.:0)
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You too π
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Yes, I feel you.
It’s beautiful writing. Intense and profound.
Hope you are enjoying the weekend.
LOve and light β€
Anand π
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Thank you so much, dear friend. I was skeptical about the validity of this one so many thanks to you for appreciation. Love to you too. Happy weekend! π
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I have read your couple of posts so I feel you are a gifted writer; truly eloquent. Geniuses have a high degree of self-doubt. I wish you very best.
LOve and light β€
Anand π
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Awww, this means a lot to me. I’m so glad I came across someone as generous as you. Take care xx
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Stating the obvious π
Love and light β€
Anand π
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Beautiful, as always… The last lines remind me somewhat of the poetic wisdom of Lao Tzu in the Tao Te Ching. Very well-written; thank you for sharing!
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Aww, thank you so much. Much love to you. π
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Beautiful.
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Thank you. :*
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as Carolos santana says-~~~~~Smooth~~~~~
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Thank you. π
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That is one of the best posts I’ve ever read today! It left me tongue-tied, I am at awe with the way you write. π
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You know how wide am I grinning Right now? Thank you for your kind words. π
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Excellent writing. You express deep thoughts in your writing; and you have a style that is quite unique; and loved by many. Keep shining!
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Haha. Thank you so much dear. π
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Lol!
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very well written Sakshi! beautiful piece.
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Thank you so much dearly! π
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exquisitely beautiful! and so touching. My heart feels happy that I have read this.
So beautiful! two-thumbs way up! π
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Aww, that feels great. Thank you CHARLIE. You are awesome. π
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π happiness coming at you. Hugs too. π
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I agree. Don’t over edit. Your words and posts have such a beauty. As a writer, I know it is hard, but trust your voice. Yours is unique and eloquent.
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That means a lot to me. Thanks. π
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